Concise Language

pronouns and adjectives.

time clauses.

intensifiers like really and very.

combine sentences when possible.

use only action verbs.

explain things clearly by repeating important information

The MBTI is based on the theories of a psychiatrist named Jung. Jung developed theories that contribute to this test.

The MBTI is partially based on the theories of psychological types that were described and explained by a psychiatrist named Jung.

The MBTI draws on the theories of psychological types developed by psychiatrist Jung.

Introverts rarely choose to work in groups but often prove to

be productive team members.

It is rare that introverts choose to work in groups, but they are often productive team members.

Introverts may prove to be productive team members, and they may make positive contributions to groups at work.

People should have careers compatible with their own ways of thinking and with their own ways of making decisions.

People should have careers compatible with their own ways of thinking and making decisions.

People should have careers that they feel to be compatible with their own specific work styles.

Carl Jung is widely considered to be a founder of psychology. He was born in 1875 and died in 1961.

Carl Jung, considered a founder of psychology, was born in 1875 and died in 1961.

Carl Jung, who was a founder of psychology, was born in 1875 and then he died in 1961.

Jung’s theory was that people’s behavior is consistent. It is not random.

Jung’s theory was that people’s behavior is consistent, not random.

Jung’s theory was that people’s behavior is consistently the same. Their behavior is not random.